fragile promises
as delicate as the mist
hanging suspended
morose
I’m feeling sad, I’m feeling gum
There’s a hollow feeling in my tum
Why? Cos no one ever notices me
Through me they just see
A tree, the trimming the whole shebang
I’m just a pane of glass, I inspire no happy pang
dance
The scene appeared so normal at first glance
Just a stagnant pond, but it held him entranced
For he knew what lay in the waters deep
The memory enough to steal his sleep
But his death had been best for the circumstance
The following prompts were used for these poems:
Crimson’s Creative Challenge #215
Moonwashed Weekly Prompt #122 – 12/20/22 Promises
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Very clever. Thank you so much for joining in the #writephoto prompt and marvellous job combining the prompts too. Happy holidays. KL ❤️
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Last one is so gripping Deb. Love the take on WritePhoto.
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Thanks Sadje, a bit dark for Christmas perhaps
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You’re welcome! Do your own thing my friend. I always enjoy your writing
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🙂
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👍🏼
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Well done on all prompts, Deb! I enjoyed the mystery in your last piece.
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Thanks Eugi, I actually had second thoughts about posting that one
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Most welcome!
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Brilliant takes on all the prompts. I agree with everyone else, i enjoyed last the most. 🙂
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Thanks, it was a great prompt to write about
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