This tale was written based on the following prompts




… mortality was such a handicap.
The stray thought taunted me as I trod the dampened sand beside the liquid blue sea, and annoyed I scowled.
I’d left them at the diner, aware of their disgust as they pretended absorption in their electronic gadgets, uncomfortably aware that they’d seen through me effortlessly. They’d seen the fragments of my shattered dreams, the pieces of the mirror I kept to remind me of my seven years bad luck, they’d felt the weight of the sunken sky which hung above me laden with gloom. They’d tasted the sawdust of my hope as it burnt in the flames of my regret.
No, they hadn’t even glanced up as I flung my body through the open door and out into the wilderness of the streets, to tread on this dampened sand beside the electric blue sea, but then I hadn’t expected them to.
For I was having dinner with a few of my closest friends when I suddenly realised,
… mortality was such a handicap.
© NopeNotPam
A very poignant story Deb. Excellent use of all the prompts. Thanks for including mine here.
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Thanks Sadje, I like grouping them, it makes it a bit easier when you have writer’s block
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You’re welcome! I can understand.
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Seamlessly combined, Deb! I especially liked this “…tasted the sawdust of my hope as it burnt in the flames of my regret.” Awesome.
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Thanks Chris, I’m slowly breaking through the writer’s block
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That’s good to know.
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Wow, that truly sends a message. Such is life today, absorbed in the virtual world which is immortal!
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Very true
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Reblogged this on Stine Writing.
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Thanks 😊
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Love the final twist.
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I built the whole thing based on that twist 😊
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Very nice use of all those prompts.
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Thanks Fandando 😊
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Captivating story. Nice take.
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Thanks 😊
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My pleasure.
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