Well I liked your style of doing it that way Deb.
quite unique!
The letters of the word “Fall” were actually felling down and in the word “climb”
The letters were themselves climbing up!
phew, no rush with that … it’s not going anywhere! Did the other reader suggest two books also? If something feels overwhelming or confusing to me I leave it for a while until the answer comes!
Nope, but I did speak to the local writer’s group and they are going to help me with it. The general consensus is I cut too much detail. That I took away links and now they need to be put back in
nope, not pam 
What a clever way to write your response Deb. It must have been quite a task. Love your poem my friend !Thanks a lot for joining in.
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The question is did it make any sense?
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Of course it did.
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Well I liked your style of doing it that way Deb.
quite unique!
The letters of the word “Fall” were actually felling down and in the word “climb”
The letters were themselves climbing up!
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Thanks Maria, I was trying something visual, like concrete poetry
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I enjoyed it, Deb, despite pulling a muscle in one of my eyes while reading it.
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Thanks Charles, I’m still doubtful that everyone worked it out
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Wow! Cleverly done, Deb!
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Thanks 🙂
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Such a creative response.
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Thanks Manja
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Shoot, that must have been tricky!
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It was, I’m not too sure it worked 🙂
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Love this, Deb. It must have taken ages. I got the ‘mend his fences’ but I’m still puzzling over the diamond-shaped one. 🤔 Put me out of my misery…
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circumfrance
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Of course it is! I saw it immediately now you’ve said. (a bit tired this morning)
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It was a bit of a silly idea
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Not silly at all, Deb. Maximum creativity, proving that I couldn’t read ‘outside the box’ 😉
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wow very clever … no idea how you managed the layout but this is super creative, kudos!
No new posts … you ok?
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I’m struggling, lying low.
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sorry … why take it personally … you asked for honest feedback 😦
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It’s not the feedback, it’s how to fix it 🧐
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phew, no rush with that … it’s not going anywhere! Did the other reader suggest two books also? If something feels overwhelming or confusing to me I leave it for a while until the answer comes!
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Nope, but I did speak to the local writer’s group and they are going to help me with it. The general consensus is I cut too much detail. That I took away links and now they need to be put back in
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ah if they have watched the process they will have more idea … I was not privy to that! SO glad they are keen to help 🙂
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🙂
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🤗🤗🤗
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Very clever concrete poetry!
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Thanks 😁
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You are welcome. 😊
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