the whistle blowing
train travels along the track
snow frozen landscape
heart breaking as the mile pass
chilled inside, no going back
© NopeNotPam
Eugi’s Causerie Weekly Prompt – Promises – December 30, 2021
the whistle blowing
train travels along the track
snow frozen landscape
heart breaking as the mile pass
chilled inside, no going back
© NopeNotPam
nope, not pam 
Very moving poem Deb!
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Inspired by Adam Bede 🙂
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Couldn’t describe this picture much better. Nice!
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Thanks Maria 🙂
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You described the image superbly, Deb, and I like that you told a story within your poetic verse. Thank you for joining in.
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Thanks Eugi, it was an inspiring prompt
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Most welcome!
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Great symmetry between picture and poem 😁❤️
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Thanks Michele 🙂
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