15 thoughts on “14th of November 2018

  1. It’s interesting to have another character’s view introduced here. My only little feedback would be, the line “Look I don’t have time for this” sort of makes it sound like he doesn’t want to be bothered with it, but he clearly does. Maybe change it to something along the lines of “I can’t right now, I have to go to work,” etc.

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